12/06/2008
Miriam, you wrote: “Rebecca [post=3309] I think is isn’t weird at all to run in the rain.” It is relaxing to run in the rain sometimes. It also depends on how it’s raining.
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Brennett,you wrote: “I went on http://freerice.com/ and answered some questions. I got some wrong, but I got 1100 grains …“when you answered the questions, what kind of questions did you you have answer. I like the fact that it helps people.
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you wrote: “I responded to Kristy’s poem about Spring (http://flordalise.tumblr.com/post/37748190/response-to- …” You like that poem too. I thought that it was really good, but why do you think that it’s weird for people to be running while it’s raining?
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Miguel, you wrote: “hey every body im realy like summer school but the only thing i dont like is when i haf to wake up e …” it’s nice that you like summer school. Does it get really hot when you are in summer school?
Tags: hot, nice, really, school, summerText posted at 12:34
11/06/2008
A peaceful day is what a lot of people hope for. People want to be able to it down and watch the clouds. See my review of Skye’s photo:
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Peaceful day!
I found a photograph in Space #3 by Skye, a fifth grader from Missouri.
I liked “My Namesake ,” because it seemed so relaxing when you look at it. The picture shows the sky filled with clouds. If you really look at it the clouds look like flowers moving to the right. Then if you look at it for a while then you will see that the clouds look like birds. The clouds look like birds flying to the left. Just looking at the clouds can make you feel relaxed.
I look forward to seeing what Skye makes next, because this picture was really nice and relaxing. I hope to see more pictures of the peaceful clouds that saw relaxation part of the environment.
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10/06/2008
Wild fun is a nice poem. People should really read it if they like going down snowy hill. Have some wild fun! rebeccag.tu…
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Have some wild fun!
I found a poem in Space #3 by Janet.
I liked “Wild fun,” because it showed what this person thinks about snowboarding and the people who snowboarding.
One part that stands out for me is: “up and down that crafted hill.Riding either way, in a rush. wow, look at that talent!” I think this is good because the person is describing what’s happening. Then she’s telling how she feels about the people going down the hill.
Another part that I liked was: “rush down the valley. Like a flick of a lighter.” This stood out for me because the person used a simile.
I look forward to seeing what Janet makes next, because I like the fact that she used a simile. I also like that fact that the poem rhymed.
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09/06/2008
What do you think about spring? What runs through your mind when you hear the word, Spring. This is what I think about spring. Spring, what a nice poem! rebeccag.tu…
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Spring, what a nice poem!
I found a poem in Space #3 by Kristy.
I liked “Spring,” because it showed what this person sees when spring is beginning. This is similar to the way I think spring looks like when it begins.
One part that stands out for me is: “While running down the road, I begin to look around, I spot something green on the ground.” I think this is good because it shows that spring is beginning. It shows how the plants are beginning to grow. I also like the fact that the poem rhymes.
Another part that I liked was: “Spring is here spring is here! Everyone begins to cheer!” This stood out for me because it shows how much people joy spring if they all get up and cheer.
I look forward to seeing what Kristy makes next, because this poem kind of related to almost everyone. A lot of people like spring and a lot of people would take time to look at the plants growing.
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