Rebecca at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

I am

an 8th Grader in Mr. Allison's New Journalism class at East Bronx Academy for the Future

My name is Rebecca. I am smart and very sensitive. I write about things that inspire me and things I love!I love school and have good grades. I also love animals and I love to draw them too. I have many pets and want to be a vet when I grow up. Those are some things about me.
School is fun to me. I love math and science the most. I have to love it because I want to be a vet. I have fun with my friends. After school I work in the library. I get to work with my best friend in the library. It's fun and sometimes we get to hang out in there because we finished all our work. That's why I love school. For me, it is fun to see the look o my parents face when they see my grades.
When I'm not in school I mostly stay home. Sometimes me and my mom would go out shopping, to eat something, or to just hang out. Twice a month we would go out and hang out with my aunts, uncles, and cousins. We would have so much fun and we would play around. At home I would play video games or make blankets. I would also paint or draw animals. That's what I do when I'm not in school.

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07/05/2008

Spring

I found a story in Space, Issue #2 by Nelson.

I liked “Spring,” because it showed how his day was in a creative way.

One sentence that stands out for me is: “Even worst, he told us to memorize all of page 3.” I think this is great because when he says page 3, then if up click it, it will go to page three. So I thought that was really creative.

Another part that I likes was: “It’s the time of year when your mind starts to bend. How do I begin to tell the story that never ends..” This stood out for me because it rhymed and it is keep of true. Our minds do kind of bend.

I do agree with Nelson that at the end of school, our eyes start getting heavy. One reason I say this is that everyone just want’s to go home. Another reason I agree with him is that every is tried because they came to school early.

I look forward to seeing what Nelson makes next, because he makes his story creative and I like the fact that he made his story rhyme.

Text posted at 12:39

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