Rebecca at EBAFF, Bronx, NY
13/05/2008
Dairous's memories
I found a story in Space, Issue #2 by Dairous.
I liked “My Memory Chain,” because it shows all his memories that mean a lot to him.
One sentence that stands out for me is: “she left the sofa but left laptop on the couch and i didn’t see it so i sat on it by mistake.” I think this is funny because it was funny when he sat on the lap top. I wonder how he felt and wonder what he did next.
Another part that I liked was: “my teacher to me told spell why and i spelled it y. man, she told me that it was normal. now this word after i missed spelled it she told me i might need some mental help.” This stood out for me because it was funny, but it was in forth grade and he probaly was not a good speller.
Speling that word wroung reminded me of the time I was in 5th grade. The teacher made everyone spell a word that ahe gave them. When the teacher came to me, she asked me to spell communtism. I never saw that word before, so I did not know how to spell it. I spelled it like this, comutism. Everyone was laughing because I got it wroung. I was so mad.
I look forward to seeing what Dairous makes next, because his stories are funny and they are very entertaning.
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